We Become
Posted on January 1, 2013, in Transformation, Trifecta Challenge and tagged Trifecta, Trifecta Writing Challenge. Bookmark the permalink. 17 Comments.
Posted on January 1, 2013, in Transformation, Trifecta Challenge and tagged Trifecta, Trifecta Writing Challenge. Bookmark the permalink. 17 Comments.
Wow!So beautifully expressed-saying so much yet,so economically-kudos!”Living”-the key word.Wishing u a wonderful “living” Dawn,tc & God Bless:-)
Lovely bit of prose :) I love the idea of In the halls of time we stand in tribute to our Spirits.
Why thank you! Yeah, I liked that idea too – it came all at once, like those things sometimes do…I didn’t even know what it meant at first, but it was so insistent I wrote it down as the first line. I liked where it ended up going!
Excellent. :)
:D Thank you!
Nicely done!
*beam*
Simply beautiful!
Thank you! :D
Wow, I love this! It so simply states a complex concept and I especially like the encouraging spirit of the piece.
Thank you! :D I was really surprised at how much fit in there, myself! I’m liking the 33 words cap I put on myself, just to see if I could do it…stretches.
Reminds me of the quote from Poe, something along the lines of, “I’m sorry this letter’s so long – I didn’t have time to make it shorter.”
Very wise! Nicely written. :D
Thanks! :D
I love that you took it from mere survival to thriving.
Thank you – guess that’s kinda my own life theme :)
I love this! Short and sweet and very true!
*beam*